How to Choose the Best Fishing Kayak

[Mr. NiceGuy]

Overthinking, overmodulated. Sounds like disjointed cut/paste plagiarism.

Too much blah-blah and meandering repetition.

Do you even fish?

If you want to write ad copy, you have to learn to get to the point:

1. capture attention and name your product
2. feature, feature .... benefit
3. call to action


Who, what, when, where, why, ... and how much

Good luck! Go sell more kayaks!