How to Choose the Best Fishing Kayak - Kayak Fishing Adventures on Big Water’s Edge

Mr. NiceGuy · 07-19-2018, 10:25 AM

Overthinking, overmodulated. Sounds like disjointed cut/paste plagiarism.

Too much blah-blah and meandering repetition.

Do you even fish?

If you want to write ad copy, you have to learn to get to the point:

1. capture attention and name your product
2. feature, feature .... benefit
3. call to action

Who, what, when, where, why, ... and how much

Good luck! Go sell more kayaks!

07-19-2018, 10:25 AM	#7
Mr. NiceGuy Manic for Life Join Date: May 2015 Location: San Diego Posts: 839	Overthinking, overmodulated. Sounds like disjointed cut/paste plagiarism. Too much blah-blah and meandering repetition. Do you even fish? If you want to write ad copy, you have to learn to get to the point: 1. capture attention and name your product 2. feature, feature .... benefit 3. call to action Who, what, when, where, why, ... and how much Good luck! Go sell more kayaks! __________________ Another ho-hum day in Paradise Last edited by Mr. NiceGuy; 07-19-2018 at 10:32 AM.

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